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The Dark Side of Me… (for Halloween)

November 1, 2010
The Demon, Etrigan

Image by ElDave via Flickr

(Keep this in mind;   If your going to be a fish… you might as well be a whale.)

I see it every day…

Their lives ..such easy prey.

They come and go with no clue

Of the hate that they put me through.

twisting and wrenching my gut .

The angels fly and make me cut…

the flesh that keeps me here.

May maggot s eat their wings

and septic vile fill drown their sing.

I hate everything…

darkness is my thing.

and from it I will see you there!

waiting for you…just smell the air.

The toxic smell that reminds you of hell.

I’ll take you to where the darkness does dwell.

in this time you won’t take it lightly

The sites that you see will be frightly.

Malicious will be the intent for you

Eternity tortured… you have no clue!

Come see my dark side

If you only knew.


Happy Halloween from 2zpoint !

25 Comments leave one →
  1. November 1, 2010 2:22 am

    dark is your thing…

    perfect Halloween shivers.

  2. November 1, 2010 3:47 am

    Now this one IS scarey. Truly dark, 2z!

    • November 1, 2010 3:57 am

      LOL! Happy Halloween… Scary was the intention but it is not my reality… just the possibility of what can be out there. (Stephen King who?) 🙂

  3. November 1, 2010 4:15 am

    Dark indeed…I like it!

  4. November 1, 2010 10:22 am

    Loved it! Very chilling poem! Perfect for Halloween.

    Happy Halloween! 😀

  5. November 1, 2010 11:07 am

    This is so cool.
    i like it

  6. November 1, 2010 11:17 am

    Nice one … I Liked the last lines…

    “Come see my dark side

    If you only knew”

    ॐ नमः शिवाय
    Om Namah Shivaya
    Twitter: @VerseEveryDay

  7. November 1, 2010 2:23 pm

    Ooooh, yeah – scary, 2zpoint! I love your use of smell too… heightens the imagination!

  8. Ms. Peaches permalink
    November 1, 2010 2:37 pm

    OMG this is definitely DARK I loved it! glad I stopped by thanks for sharing!

  9. November 1, 2010 2:47 pm

    yeeeeeeeeeee!!!! love it!

  10. November 1, 2010 4:17 pm

    Nice Potluck entry.

    P.S. Whales are mammals, not fish.

    • November 1, 2010 5:33 pm

      Has anybody ever told you that you have a brilliant perception of the obvious and a horrible sense of meaning? But if you insist…your smart…I’m dumb…Your a genius…I’m an idiot… Is that better or must I go on to satisfy your ego? have a great day Eric.

  11. November 1, 2010 11:08 pm

    Nicely done dark for ‘not your thing’… well written pulled from those places hiding.

    • November 1, 2010 11:19 pm

      Thank you for your kind comment… I usually try to give something that gives people something to smile about in some way but I did this for the Monday potluck and the theme asked for something dark and scary so I obliged! Peace be with you Reflections!

  12. dan permalink
    November 2, 2010 3:51 am

    You do the darker side of you well. Good poem for Halloween!

  13. November 2, 2010 4:23 am

    Dark, sinister – thank you I enjoyed it very much

  14. November 2, 2010 11:20 pm

    Love it! Very H. P. Lovecraft-like, except it made me laugh. 🙂

    • November 2, 2010 11:45 pm

      LOL! I’m glad you didn’t take it serious…it made me laugh seeing all the comments…I think I got to some people even though I did say it was for Halloween as a pre-warning. Take care!

  15. November 2, 2010 11:29 pm

    YEEEOOOWWW!!! That really was scary! Full of dark spite and all…. brrr…
    I hope it wasn’t intended for any person in particular.. if so, their days on this planet sure are numbered!!! ON ONE HAND! 🙂

    Thoroughly enjoyed reading this daaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaarkkkk piece… thanks for sharing it with poetry potluck!

    • November 2, 2010 11:40 pm

      Nah…just did this for the potluck. All for the theme…nothing more, but isn’t it amazing how the more we see the easier it is to think an evil thought? Just wondering if others shared that view.

  16. November 5, 2010 9:12 am

    Scary. Chuckle. Thanks for this. I don’t think I’ll sleep much now…

  17. jennygoth permalink
    September 8, 2011 6:43 pm

    thought id come and read this as darkness is my thing lol love halloween and paranormal sends me into excited mode xxjen

    • September 10, 2011 5:12 pm

      Excite as you will, All in fun. Still I wrote this to demonstrate how close and easy the darkside of all of us can surface. Usually, my spin on things is toward positivity but Halloween can make the Devil do a dance even he’s in the shadows where no one can watch.

  18. jennygoth permalink
    September 13, 2011 9:25 pm

    just came by to say hello and collect some gentle positive vibes xxjen


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