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If she only knew…

November 2, 2010

I watch her sleep and see an angel

I see her telling stories to our babiesShawnda

How blessed we are… words cannot tell

To see her smile, it lights up any room.

She always saves me from my personal gloom

To love her so deeply and passionately in bed

and the next day…

I can’t get her out of my head

She is the one who makes me whole

I don’t tell her enough  and this  know

Sometimes I fear that she might have a clue

that I simply can’t lose her

If she only knew…

24 Comments leave one →
  1. November 2, 2010 3:29 am

    That is really lovely. It’s really wonderful that she completes you so well. And you know what? I bet she knew, but if she didn’t before, she does now.

    P.S. She is lovely too.

    • November 2, 2010 3:44 am

      Yeah she might know but she sure does keep things to her self well…Still waters run deep in her. Thank you for stopping by Pattiken It’s good to see you!

  2. November 2, 2010 3:43 am

    Talk to her, face to face, eye to eye, even during times when it’s hard to try. Make sure you listen each and every day, without trying to fix problems she might say. You have a special woman I’m sure you know, be patient and forgiving, let your romance grow, while angels watch her when she’s asleep, let your heart guard her with a love so deep. If she knows and you know, you are both blessed.

    • November 2, 2010 4:13 am

      Thank you for the inspirational poetry just for us. I am not the easiest person to live with but she does cut me an incredible amount of slack. Your heart felt words did not fall on deaf ears I will be taking her out on a date on Friday…Take care Dan Thank you for stopping by.

  3. Dan permalink
    November 2, 2010 3:46 am

    Both of you are truly blessed because I’m sure both of you know how much you are loved.

  4. November 2, 2010 9:00 am

    So wonderful to hear such a love story; that you both adore each other… keep it fresh every day and it will last for ever!

  5. November 2, 2010 4:05 pm

    I love it. So sweet, I hope she knows how lucky she is..?

  6. November 3, 2010 2:06 am

    Love is eternal bliss.
    You have nicely expressed it and I am sure she knows it.
    In any case love does not need any language, it is written on face.
    Our actions, expressions speak a lot about it, but we want it to be spoken, the way you did it.
    Nice read.
    Have a good day.

  7. meeti batra permalink
    November 3, 2010 6:11 am

    i just cannot understand how u get the magic words n put thm so correctly
    this is d bestest best way to tell her n i surely know she would b really happy after your appericiation so publicly
    one should never hesitate or delay to say thank u / or / love you as it might b too late
    these small words add a new meaning / a new zing n a whole amount of energy into d relationship
    i wish u both love n joy n peace in yr relationship
    god bless u now n always

    • November 3, 2010 12:34 pm

      You are so kind my friend. May you speak from the heart what is on your mind and then…you make the thought rhyme.

  8. November 3, 2010 11:17 am

    Ya big softie! haha. No, sounds like you have a match made in heaven. I wish… she looks lovely – lucky guy. Enjoy it, my friend. As for me, I continue to seek…

    Cheers bro

    Luke @ WordSalad

    • November 3, 2010 12:39 pm

      LOL!Yeah…I know! I figured someone might revoke my man card but it was well worth it. She’s awesome…May you find a girl worth tossing your man card for as well tough guy! Thanks for the laugh!

  9. November 3, 2010 2:32 pm

    she is an angel.
    lucky you.
    lovely her,
    a perfect pair.

  10. November 3, 2010 2:33 pm

    Please help giving (belated) birthday wishes to 3 or 4 fellow poets:

    Thanks a lot for the support.
    Happy November!
    Your presence adds light to our space, keep shining!

  11. November 3, 2010 7:40 pm

    week 31 perfect poet award reminder,
    let me know if you accept,
    thanks a ton.
    welcome to rally week 32.

  12. November 3, 2010 8:02 pm

    Holding, grasping to one’s heart
    The Love in her eyes was in this start
    Both of us seeing hearts in Love grow
    The gentleness as we embrace what we know
    So Now it is all about our Love so True
    I look at her always as if she only knew

    enjoy as well 2zpoint(+)

    • November 3, 2010 8:16 pm

      Great words and a special poem just for the two of us. You are Awesome Dom* Thank you for the amazing comment. 🙂

  13. November 4, 2010 12:54 am

    So lovely! 🙂

  14. November 4, 2010 8:19 am

    Aww… this is so sweet! Ofcourse she knows!!
    But in any case, tell her …as often as you possibly can!! 😀

    You are simply blessed to have each other!! And may that always stay…

  15. November 6, 2010 10:40 pm

    Such a sweet, gentle, loving poems. I’m sure she appreciated it and appreciates you.

    • November 7, 2010 6:02 am

      Thank you for your kind words you are always a welcome guest Ms. Dedes! Peace be with you.

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  17. May 11, 2011 8:41 pm

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