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Fear…the rush.

November 14, 2012
English: Cliff Diver, MAZATLAN

English: Cliff Diver, MAZATLAN (Photo credit: Wikipedia)


My heart beats hard and I lose my will


set to the motion that I now feel


harder and harder, the noise comes


down to the bottom


here I come


will I still live when this time will stop


or did I take my last breath at the top


breathe… I must breathe its the only chance I’ve got


feel my legs…I can not


flying with force and shear raw power


not knowing now if this is my final hour


…So much I have left undone


I got to breathe…try to stay loose


can’t breathe its like I’m caught in a noose


A sudden thunderous crash but I’m alright


I’m shaking inside from sheer panic and fright


The crisis is over


No it was not my finest hour


yet it was as fine as that one will be


for I faced my fear today and it did not get me.


-2zpoint (an adrenaline junkie)




19 Comments leave one →
  1. September 14, 2010 12:46 pm

    The poem is about a moment of time and how I dealt with fear and realizing I had no control but this moment in time reminds me that I got through it and I will get through anything else that I encounter just like I got through this.
    After I jumped off the cliff, on my way to the water, I thought about these things but when I hit the water and turned a flip from the impact I came up alive and it felt Awesome. That feeling is what it is all about. Thank you for your comment.

  2. September 25, 2010 12:21 am

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  4. penelopephoebe permalink
    October 5, 2010 8:26 am

    Hey, I liked this. Very well written.

    • October 5, 2010 12:04 pm

      Thank you Penelopephoebe! By your name it almost seems written just for you.LOL!

  5. October 5, 2010 12:41 pm

    vivid and fun version of fear…
    well done!

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    • October 28, 2012 8:08 pm

      Yes, I am @2zpoint and @Wickedthump on Twitter. Peace be with you.

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