Climbing mountains while dreaming of beaches
Edging my way with ice underneath far above the crumbled rock below
I feel as though I may fall if I move yet I press on
I felt so overwhelmed when I was low
staring up to the endless top
Yet I stepped on
Up I go it’s so cold now
I feel the want to stop
but if I do I know that I’ll quit
And I may never reach the top
Oh how I wish that I was laying on a beach with warm sand
and the thunderous sound of water crashing close at hand
But I am climbing up farther than ever before
and I ‘d bet that the seagulls on that beach would see me and soar
Just a little bit further and I’ll reach the top
I must not drift off for I fear it may cause me to stop
But the kids are playing on that nice warm beach
And the top has been too far of a travel and out of my reach
Focus! I must press on
Climbing the last step I now stand
on something that I could not explain how grand
but the world seems small from where I do now perch
the top is mine…no longer do I search
beaches could not compare to the sweetness of this thin air
I am so high above the ground that many will never be
most people will not have this view
they will have to settle for a beach by the sea.
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This is so refreshing…
love the image,
dynamic, fun, and brilliant piece.
well done!
Thank you Jingle for your kind comment I have posted it on your rally
here is the link:
http://jinglepoetry.blogspot.com/2010/10/poetry-potluck-beaches-and-mountains.html
cool!
oh holy cow…yikes..eeek. You are a far better man than me Gunga Din.
Terrified of heights-I’ll keep my toes warm on the baech while watching you climb to the heavens! Great poem!
LOL! I guess that’s the smartest route for you then. If you can’t climb with the goats then stay off their rocks, but remember fear is the uncertain thought that is in our heads and there is no greater feeling than overcoming it.
Nicely done…the poem takes the reader on the climb to the top. Thanks for adding to Potluck 🙂
Thank you for reading…sometimes we all have a long climb to get there.
this is so true as of our life n spiritual journey
v gt tired at times
wanna lay down but thn r triggered dat v r amongst those few chosen ones to reach the top
morever the sweet result of goin deeper motivates boosts us n energises us to keep movin
It might be easier just to quit and go do something else but then your life is stifled by giving up. Always keep climbing. Thank you for reading.
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m nt as talented
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What a beautiful one. That image is so breathtakingly beautiful.. very well written.. Oh yes, not many may get to enjoy that view.. Thanks for sharing-
Happy Potluck- xoxox
http://oliviasmindlymatters.wordpress.com/2010/05/26/water-and-wind-and-an-un-grained-me/
I like the way you combined beaches and mountains. While climbing you still kept your feet on the beach through the gulls, the children, and those who will never see the world from the top of a mountain. Great job!
My life has been a constant upward climb. Challenging, but I hope that somewhere ahead there is an hiatus to catch my breath…
The choice to catch your breathe is yours if you are bold enough to take it. Remember this life is yours not theirs…Define it by living it your way!
a very beautifully written poem. seems you know something about climbing a mountain.
I’ll tell that tale one day.
You did a great job of sharing the experience of mountain climbing. I drive up and down CA often and broke down at the foot of Mt. Whitney in August. While waiting for parts, got to meet a lot of climbers including one “old” guy who’d just completed his 47th climb of Whitney. Impressive.
I’ll tell an adventure I had climbing one of these days when I have time. That sure is some beautiful country over that way!
only the ones who reach the top admire the best view of the world one can get! 🙂 the emotions behind the mountain climber’s mind is so beautifully expressed here, and it relates so well to life and its climb too! Lovely one 2Z point!
Morning Mist – My Potluck
Absolutely right Leo! and that was the encouraging message I was aiming for…I thank you for your feed back and I enjoy reading your work as well!
I have fear of heights. Had me on the edge with this one. What an adventure …
http://jingleyanqiu.wordpress.com/2010/10/16/happy-birthday-wishes-to-talon/
help visit Talon to wish her a happy birthday today,
Thanks!
Really not sure…would help if I could but have no idea.
Hi, for some reason when I place your feed into google reader, it won?t work. Can you give me the RSS link just to be sure I?m using the most appropriate one?
I am not sure what causes it to work or not but I believe that it is because I have not had the Google web master to re-verify my site… I will look at it when I get back home and see if I can correct the problem.
I don’t know about smart…but I do know that some people are watching out for me and I am thankful for them. I am also thankful to be so blessed in this life. Peace be with you.
I have sent you an email giving permission… so long as you give credit where it is due. Thank you for asking and peace be with you.
My venture began with the Green Mountains many weeks ago
Then mountain fever was released as I had more to go
From the Adirondacks, Catskills, Petersburg Pass, Heldebergs and more
I was on a roll for destiny as I seen no more doors
After 5 I had conquered all laid to rest
Mt. Greylock in Massachusetts was the one to past the test
With footage of over 3491 feet above sea level seen
It is Now in the memory books as a few days ago it was the last being
But a couple more before winter will do the trick
As once again I get mountain fever that does not make me sick
True..as I have climbed 6 mountains in 6 weeks at 56 years years old and no stopping me in doing anything as NOW I AM ALIVE with Universal gap energy from my SOUL!!!!!…enjoy 2zpoint
Dom* 🙂
That’s what I’m talking about! 56 years young and ALIVE HAHAHAHA! yes my friend some people don’t know that feeling and some people never will but I do from many different things and my hat is off to you! You should read my story “An 11 year old’s rock climbing tale” this was just the start but life is full of adventure once a person knows how to live. Congratulations on your extraordinary feats!
thanks…I live a subjective reality within the Soul I have found that was always with me and I have not stopped yet…as I have 1 more mountain to achieve before it gets dark around here as the last one I climbed the trail markings were not that great and I do not bring nothing with me but me in a sweatshirt, hiking boots and a pair of jeans and keen eye sight in the light…hiking stick provided by a dead branch from Mother Nature…looking at two sometime this week…Green Mountains beyond the Harmon Hills, this one I climbed or something might be in the Adirondacks that is close by I can get to and do it…enjoy as well(+)
Dom* 🙂
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Thank you for your visit! Peace be with you!
Keep on hangin’ on, Stuart.
You’re just the man for the job!
Peace, bro 🙂
Keith!
Sorry about the slow reply. I was in Devine, Tx with no wifi. I hope that you have a great Thanksgiving! I’ll be herding cows tomorrow it seems…they went through a fence. I guess I’ll either work up an appetite, run off what I did eat, or drown my sorrows in food if I don’t get it done due to the buffaloes! Peace to you Brother!
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